I would like you to get some help proof reading your answer. The content is good but the spelliung, punctuation etc does sometimes get in the way of understanding. I am happy to do this with you or you might access some additional help. See my email about it.
Very good points made and a good range of conventions explore. I'm not so sure it is a challenge to conventions by placing your main cover line where you have done. I think I can recall quite a few covers which do this.
You mention 'upper class' quite a lot and this is a tricky term, because the 'upper class' or aristocracy are a minute proportion of our population (less that 1%) where as the 'upper middle class' (professionals like doctors, lawyers etc) are a more important fraction. So your magazine should target middle and upper middle class readers, social grades A and B.
On your contents page you should explore the variation in font sizes and colours in your contents list - it's done well and is a typical convention (larget text for article title, smaller explanatory text below, page number in different colour).
Your DPS article's sub-heading - should it be 'songwriter' rather than 'songwriters'?
You mention use of 'white space' but yours is black! Just says space...
Otherwise very strong, as I say, and with improvements in puntuation etc (particularly sentencing and capitalisation of 'I', etc) will gain a very good mark.
I would like you to get some help proof reading your answer. The content is good but the spelliung, punctuation etc does sometimes get in the way of understanding. I am happy to do this with you or you might access some additional help. See my email about it.
ReplyDeleteVery good points made and a good range of conventions explore. I'm not so sure it is a challenge to conventions by placing your main cover line where you have done. I think I can recall quite a few covers which do this.
ReplyDeleteYou mention 'upper class' quite a lot and this is a tricky term, because the 'upper class' or aristocracy are a minute proportion of our population (less that 1%) where as the 'upper middle class' (professionals like doctors, lawyers etc) are a more important fraction. So your magazine should target middle and upper middle class readers, social grades A and B.
On your contents page you should explore the variation in font sizes and colours in your contents list - it's done well and is a typical convention (larget text for article title, smaller explanatory text below, page number in different colour).
Your DPS article's sub-heading - should it be 'songwriter' rather than 'songwriters'?
You mention use of 'white space' but yours is black! Just says space...
Otherwise very strong, as I say, and with improvements in puntuation etc (particularly sentencing and capitalisation of 'I', etc) will gain a very good mark.